Abductions? [Add-On to the plot]

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Alright, so I was thinking: What could I do to make the plot exciting? I mean, I know it hasn't really started yet, but here's my idea. I feel like such an evil genius right now. XD

So here's how the Volturi come into play. It starts out with this: Alice and Renesmee out on a hunt, aunt and niece happy-time after shopping. Sounds safe and harmless, right? Wrong. ;D Of course, Maria's out hunting too; hunting for Cullens. She doesn't know who Renesmee is, but she certainly knows who Alice is. So, delightfully, she takes the pair into rather unhospitable custody. She uses them for ransom.

Well, of course the Cullens - already frantic over the loss of Alice and Nessie - receive the note for ransom. Without Alice to see their futures, they're in chaos. And Bella, Edward, and Jacob are totally freaking about Nessie. Bella and Jacob secretly plan to save Nessie and Alice themselves, because we all know how Bella can get and Jacob of course isn't going to stay behind when there's a chance of seeing his imprint again. =] They leave Edward behind - see how evil I am? And we ALL know how Edward gets without Bella. So he and Jasper and whoever else chooses to come along goes off to stop Bella and Jacob for making a horrible mistake.

Meanwhile, the Volturi have heard of Maria's feats. Aro is extremely overjoyed that someone managed to apprehend Alice. Renesmee... eh, who cares? Just a side tool. Anyways... he sends a whole bunch of the guard to take Renesmee and Alice out of Maria's clutches. Here's the catch - there's a new member of the guard that can take abilities away (it's the only way I can open up things for the future, which you will read about in a few seconds... or minutes, however long it takes for your to read).

Bella and Jacob arrive just in time to find that the Volturi have come for Nessie and Alice. This equals trouble, right? RIGHT. So Felix, Jane, Demetri, Alec, and whoever else is there take Bella and Jacob gladly. Knowing what Jane can do, Bella obviously puts her shield around everyone. Problem: Jane has Bob (we're going to call the vampire who takes away abilities 'Bob' right now) take Bella's ability away temporarily. So she can hurt whoever and make sure that nobody puts up a fight. You guys can decide who she tortures.

Edward, Jasper, and some of the others arrive too. But they're a bit too late. Felix has already had some of the captured vampires taken away (you can decide on that too). Team Edward/Jasper put up a bit of a fight, but lose of course - so Felix takes everyone back to Volterra. Oh-nos! Now what will the Cullens do? So, here's what I want you guys to tell me.

1) Do you think this is a good idea?
2) Who should Jane torture the most often to keep everyone in line?
3) Who should be taken away before Edward and Jasper get there, to increase angst level?

XD You guys can be evil geniuses too, now! I'm also a master of abduction plots - because I'm a sucker for angst. What can you do? I'm a teen, I live for this stuff.